The second section of the novel is told in Danny's voice as he reconstructs the events that led up to Eddie's death. At the suggestion of his doctors, Danny writes about how he met Eddie and how Eddie became both friend and annoyance. Here Chernoff allows the reader to begin filling in the pieces of Nancy's story by seeing Frank and Nancy's affair from Danny's point of view. As Frank grows closer to Nancy, he begins to include Danny in his father-son outings with Eddie--including a deer hunting trip to Wisconsin for which Danny and Eddie have to take a bow hunting safety class.
At one point, Danny realizes how much he misses not having a father and how unfair it is that Eddie has Frank, who Danny thinks deserves a better son. Chernoff handles Danny's voice deftly, getting just the right mix of naiveté, pain, and wisdom:
"At times like this I wish I had a dad because my mom doesn't want me to tell her the real sad things I sometimes think about...I think dads don't care as much if you're sad about something. Maybe it's because they love you even more. Or maybe they love you less. I can't decide."
Chernoff, who is an accomplished poet as well as a fiction writer, has a spare, precise prose style that provides a needed balance to the emotional subject matter and yet manages to give Nancy and Danny distinct voices. However, when the novel moves into the third person in its final section, alternating between Frank and Nancy's points of view, I found myself less engaged. Frank's bizarre behavior, while not even fully understandable to himself, could have been better prepared for earlier in the novel. There were also a few other significant events, like Frank's bond with Nancy's friend Riley, which seemed to appear out of nowhere and left me unsatisfied.
A Boy in Winter is a novel with a great deal of merit that just misses making a jump into the realm of the truly memorable. Maxine Chernoff skillfully charts the nuances of loss, guilt, love, and redemption, and creates a portrait of lives made desperate and bleak by a devastating accidental moment. Yet despite the sadness, Chernoff brings Nancy, Frank, Danny, and the reader to a shaky kind of hope.
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